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Rick V's avatar

"...Performances, of musick distinctly not British,— Viennese perhaps, Hungarian, even Moorish” is a particularly interesting turn, even by Pynchonian standards. Each new term in the series marks a musical step away from strict Western European Practice Period vocabulary—new scale tones and modalities, new and odd-metered rhythms, new formal constructs.

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Andrew H.'s avatar

Good observation. I didn't noticed that actually. And I think it parallels with each being a step away from Western cultural norms as a whole.

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"Laws are therefore written not by those who would most benefit from a lawful society, but by those who own these people’s wages...Prisons confine any Preterite so brave to break these laws. All these metaphors of death stem from something as ridiculous as a massive block of cheese, rolling down the hill in all its unnecessary enormity, ready and willing to crush anything beneath its rind."

Really well said. I was so impressed with the sheer poetry of these sentences that I felt compelled to comment.

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Andrew H.'s avatar

Thank you. That was one of my favorite portions of this chapter/essay. It's hard to maintain some semblance of good prose while writing these every week, but I'm glad the attempt doesn't go unnoticed.

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